Harry Potter story

Heres a little story i did on Harry Potter- it's so short because i wanted to try some colour (the greens actually just grey inkwash- which iv still not quite got right yet). I did it in colour becuase I wanted to do something a bit unique by putting prose in the pannles, it's not there yet because my writers have done it yet, but i've been sitting on these pages for almost a month and thought i should put them up. The story is a dream Harry has about Fenrir Greyback delivering a horcrux to Voldemort.

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Heres the original page: (just for comparison- really not sure about the green effect)